Name: Selena Mortis
Nickname/Alias: Sel, Lena.
Age: 100 looks 20
Gender: Female
Race: Demi- devi-Angel Goddess
Title: Lady Selena
Appearance-
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Blue
Body built: fragile and athletic
Weight: 97Ibs
Height: 5’5”
Marks/Scars/Tattoo’s: None
Strengths: Her power, body, her attitude towards others, loyalty towards people who get close to her. Her family(which are all dead). Fire, wind And Light.
Weakness: Males, someone more powerful then she is, her feelings towards lower beings, her attitude, sweets. Water, Earth and Shadow.
Weapons: A trident(something like a pitchfork), and hidden daggers.
Talents-
Powers/ability/spells: Selena’s powers are tied with Fire, Wind and Light.

Singing- her voice has the ability to calm someone down or to control them.
Glamour- the ability to make herself look different, like letting her fool her enemies thinking she is a harmless little girl, or a old lady.

Healing- ability to heal herself and others, she can heal a lot only if she doesn’t push herself too much.

Mind reading- Allows her to read anyone’s mind, though she can’t do this if the person has trained to keep mind readers out.

Teleportation/Summoning- Allows her to teleport anything to her, and summon any object, at will, all she has to do is think of the thing she wants and it appears in her hand.

Orbing- Allows her to move herself anywhere she can get too, it will surround her in bright lights and then she will vanish and appear in the place she wished to go.

Learning of Tongues- this is a skill which she learned from being experimented on, it allows her to understand and talk in over 60 billion languages.

Sensitive hearing- is an ability which allows Selena to hear someone about a few feet or a hall way away.

Fast learning- she has a fast way of learning things, and understanding them in an instance.

Blazing flame- allows one to summon a fire around one self, can also be used as a blast.

Holy light- this spell is so the user can shoot a blast of light at the foe, it widens when it gets closer, very good against Shadow and the undead.

Emerald Hurricane- the user summons the winds to create a hurricane, which attack like blades like emeralds.

Absorbing- allows her to absorb power beings powers.

Personality: Selena is a mysterious to anyone who meets her. She can be very sweet the first time she meets someone, or very mean, it depends what mood she is in. She hates it when no one pays attention to her, so she will go out of her way to get attention. She gets overly shy though in front of a lot of people. She is a Spoiled brat, and always gets what she wants.
Other than that, she doesn’t let her feelings show half the time, she only relaxes once she has gotten to know that person, and when she cares for someone she would do anything to keep them with her.

History: Selena was born from a Mother who was an angel and from a father who was a demon, she is in fact forbidden fruit, one which was never meant to be born, her mother and father went against their parents’ wishes and since their parents where enemies, they didn’t care since they were in love so they had Selena after they run away, but Selena’s mother and father came back home, and after seeing how cute their granddaughter was they dismissed it though secretly wished she was never born.
By the time Selena was three she was getting spoiled a lot trained in the arts of magic, she became very adept at magic, she loved all her family. Though at the time when she was seven years old, her parent’s went away for a quick trip and were assassinated on the road, now Selena’s grand-parents took her in and raised her as the Princess of Drailia, though people called her ‘Lady Selena’ which annoyed her to no end she wanted to be called ‘Princess Selena’.
By the time she was near 100 (though she looks 20 from her race), she was adept at anything thrown at her, magic language and all, she decided to go out and to a new world, summoning up a portal she stepped through it and when she came through she landed in water wonder what the hell this was, she would hover into the air looking about and frowns, seeing floating things in the water, she later finds out they are called ‘boats’ and that she is in the Land called Railia, this will be her new home till she can summon the portal to return home. She has self reclaimed herself to be the 'Goddess' Of Railia

1. You spelt Self-proclaimed wrong o.o

2. Demi-, devi-? Explain the race properly, and no goddesses. Angel's are allowed though.

3. Singing. Is their and extent to this control? A way to break free of it, or to be immune to it? It's too powerful.

4. Orbing and Teleporting, same thing really. Also, how long does it take to prepare to teleport/ orb, and is there a way to interupt it?

5. Blazing flame, Holy Light, Emerald Hurricane: Nothing wrong with the spells, other than you need to describe them better to have judgement pasted properly on them.

6. Absorbing: Absorbing other peoples powers? Not allowed at all. Remove it.

Other than that, it's acceptable.

For those who didn't know, this was simply a example profile, on the don't's of powers, and what will be said to correct it. It was also said to show what will be allowed.